Wednesday, 29 May 2013

Writing


I went to the zoo.
Isaac

Wow Isaac!  What a cool story!  I just love your detailed picture.  I can see a fabulous giraffe with a big long neck and 4 legs.  I can see you with your red angry bird hat and your blue jacket.  You can write some basic sight words too!  You wrote 'I' and then you found 'to' on your word card and copied it.  Ka pai buddy!  Elly

1 comment:

  1. Fantastic story Isaac...you had a wonderful time at the zoo with Dad. What other animals did you see?
    Mum x

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